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KnaveofSpades

"He calls the knaves Jacks!" TTK
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9-5 Flesh by KnaveofSpades, literature

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Zen buddhist, interested in architecture, photography, cinematography, philosophy, and poetry.

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thanks for the fave on my lyrics!
Thank you for the fave :)
Thanks for the Fav! What'd you like about it? Anything I should improve?
The rhyme is great! I really like the first 4 lines. kinda a cool idea, there. the last two lines are kinda awkward. i know you broke the rhyme scheme on purpose, but it makes the ending harder to read. idk.
I just tried to link the last line to the rhyme in the second and fourth lines, but reader knows best. If you think that it's awkward then it's awkward. Thanks for the feedback
Thanks belatedly for the fav!