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About Me Member Self-proclaimed Genius KnaveofSpades16/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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  • Current Residence: Woodinville, WA
  • Interests: Macs, friends, music, poetry, programming, writing my story: Joushi, graphic design, movies
  • Favourite movie: The Dark Knight, The Prestige, Batman Begins, The Matrix, ROTK, Across the Universe, V for Vendetta
  • Favourite band or musician: Pink Floyd, Porcupine Tree, Death Cab for Cutie
  • Favourite genre of music: Progressive Rock, though anything goes really
  • Favourite artist: I don't really know any artists. so i'll say me.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Stephen King, Darren Shan, Stephanie Meyer, Ray Bradbury, Eoin Colfer
  • Favourite photographer: Paul Donelson
  • Favourite style of art: Poetry
  • Operating System: MAC POWER!!!!!!
  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod Nano
  • Shell of choice: I'm really not sure what this means....
  • Wallpaper of choice: awesome stuff i Stumbled Upon
  • Skin of choice: Not sure what this means either....
  • Favourite game: Halo 2, Guitar Hero III, Zelda, Apples2Apples, Chess, Warhammer 40K
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox
  • Favourite cartoon character: Homer Simpson
  • Personal Quote: "Genius!!!"
  • Tools of the Trade: pencil, mac, cello, piano, paintbrush, TI-83+ Calculator

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:iconcopperbard:
Thanks for the Fav! What'd you like about it? Anything I should improve?

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I dance out my own beat, but you're invited!
:iconknaveofspades:
The rhyme is great! I really like the first 4 lines. kinda a cool idea, there. the last two lines are kinda awkward. i know you broke the rhyme scheme on purpose, but it makes the ending harder to read. idk.

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"But I, I who have seen the universe,
Dream only of your eyes"-
Excerpt from "Dreams" by Zak Whittington
:iconcopperbard:
I just tried to link the last line to the rhyme in the second and fourth lines, but reader knows best. If you think that it's awkward then it's awkward. Thanks for the feedback

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I dance out my own beat, but you're invited!
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
Thanks belatedly for the fav!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconk-hos:
Thanks for the Favorite!

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\:D/
:iconavalon928810:
Thanks for the fave.
:D

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Screw vampires and werewolves,
I'm a Narnian.
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*The-Literati
BWA!
Go check 'em out!
:)
:iconknaveofspades:
that was an awesome poem. i've actually been considering writing something almost exactly like that, except about love, not a summer camp. =)
and cool comment signature thing. hahaha

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"But I, I who have seen the universe,
Dream only of your eyes"-
Excerpt from "Dreams" by Zak Whittington
:iconavalon928810:
Thanks. :D
Summer camp's cool though.
It's all summer like. :P
Your gallery's pretty impressive though,
You shouldn't bring yourself down to my level.

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Screw vampires and werewolves,
I'm a Narnian.
~~~
*The-Literati
BWA!
Go check 'em out!
:)

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